Stormcrow

Thank you so much! And I have 21 chapters total so you'll have a lot to read

Wow! This is great sentimental poem. I really like the lines "i found a garden full of weeds that thrived off of dark thoughts". That made me think of mordor ...

Thank you! That does help. I hadn't thought of the last point...

Very interesting! This story is so discriptive. I could see everything happeneing in my mind, and the action was paced perfectly. Great job! I'm not that great at short stories, ...

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Thank you so much! This really helps. Yeah, spelling and grammer aren't my best. I just made some major changes. I just had a tutoring hour with my author friend ...

Thank you so much! This really helps. Yeah, spelling and grammer aren't my best. I just made some major changes. I just had a tutoring hour with my author friend ...

I just made some major changes. I just had a tutoring hour with my author friend Mathew Dicks/Greens, depending where you live. I changed the point of view back and ...

Thank you for the review! It really helps. Actually, the battle is needed because the war doesn't get much further than that battle for about 12 years. I completely didn't ...

I'm sorry if i sounded rude, but I was being honest. If u want to get better, u need honist opinions. No one is perfect. I'm not. Not even close. ...

Wow. How much have u written? Wrd count please, or pages. I've written 110k words, or about 300 pages of luike 370 word pages

Also, this has tons of gramatical errors. I'm bad too, but still "when I was is grade and middle school" is not the best. Also, this "chapter" is pretty wandering, ...

Just saying, I've been writing a book, and my shortest chapters are over 4 thousand (don't say it!) If u r aiming for younger kids, great. But for YA u ...