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Re: LOSS - League Of ShapeShifters
Ari (borrowed): Now one of them has to pick me up. Great. Morgan stifles her laughter, bending down to whisper in my ear. "I'll get'cha." How come I can still ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Guide Dogs
Hey, all. I'm looking for some information on guide dogs. Specifically, what does a dog's harness look like? How quickly can a skilled person put in on him or her?
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: You Say Can't, I Say Can 1): highlighting various disorders
Autistic fellow here. Actually, I hate crowds. Anything more than ten people, and I freak out. I will run outside, clam up or refuse to speak to others at all. ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Beyond Reach: a depiction of What it's like to have...
Vox, if it's all right, I'll pray for you.
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: A Confession of Sorts: Life with Tourette's Syndrome
This sounds a bit like me. Hm. I don't tend to curse out loud unless I'm really distressed. However, I do have a tendency to make involuntary movements. (I.e. if ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
The Secret of NIMH. This story is by Patrick C. O'Brien. Bascially the plot is about a farm community of rats, mice and other animals. Unfortunately the folks at MGM ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: LOSS - League Of ShapeShifters
Morgan: How did one stop their thoughts being heard? I reached down, trying to get Ari to stop her wild spinning. She nipped my finger and I drew back with ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Memoirs of a Colossus
Is this based on the "Shadow of the Colossus" game? You had a very few errors, which I'll take a minute to point out. He had awoken This is all ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Mary-sue
Parodies are a different matter. Someone could write a parody of your memoirs; would you laugh?
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Ways to keep a reader interested and get more likes!
Avoid similes, I say! But that's only because I tend to think logically. If I see a simile, I think "Well that's beautiful." And I forget about it. What one ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Is this avoiding Cliches?
I'd council you not to write such a book, but I know you'll ignore me. So... selling one's soul to the devil isn't really new. Just look at Twilight or ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel
Hey, Hero! I'm rereading Fang now, and Mom's next in line to read it. I sort of agree with your review. The thing is, I wish Patterson had saved Ari. ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Flip Flops
Is this a nonfiction piece? Just asking. The only real journey I ever went on I didn’t go anywhere. Comma after on. It makes the writing flow better, see? the ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: tutoring - best way to teach?
I find that a good method to teach is by using "anecdotes." For example, my seventh-grade math teacher used stories to explain concepts. A rhombus became a square that'd been ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Spamming [A Must Read For All]
Nate, I do understand your frustration. Also, it would be a good idea to use the points as currency again. Otherwise you have useless points. :(
Mar 24, 2010
