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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Heirs to the Light excerpt

    "Bird," said Aurora. "Brr," Spirit replied. Her eyes, usually bright as sapphires, dulled with yet another failure. The white otter, though, wasn't about to give up. "Gull," she said. "That ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mr.Helium

    P'raps you should capitalize "earth."

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Heirs to the Light

    Aaron slid through the calm sea, his motions as fluid as the water around him. He always felt at home in the sea. When he was little he thought of ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Maid and the Stone

    Festival Night Three nights later the full moon cast its light on the islanders gathered beside the sea. All of them were silent. An otter named Talan was the first ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Untilted -- Suggestions Welcome!

    Hello Arris! I couldn't help but notice you had a couple of errors to do with the characters' swords. pulling my sword out from the hilt and in front of ...

    May 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: extract, from new story x

    You certainly are in a flutter! Sorry about the bad joke. But your story has a very rushed feeling, as if one's supposed to read it all in one breath. ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: Seeker: Book 1 Of The Noble Warriors Trilogy

    Good show, my friend. Is the book printed in America?

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Some Minor (Though Noticeable) Changes

    Nate... is there any way you can send mass messages about all this? I don't come on here as often as I used to...

    Apr 28, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: A Flash Fiction

    There... wasn't any symbolism. This was simply an assignment to write a descriptive piece.

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: A Flash Fiction

    “Not much of a view, is it?” John turned away from the window. “Sure it is! It’s not every day you get to watch the rain on a different world.” ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Novels & Novellas (updated)

    I'm a little fuzzy on this one. Would someone tell me how you start a project?

    Apr 20, 2010
  • Research Re: Give me your American slang!

    If you're looking for names guys call each other, here are a few. "dude"; "brother"; "brah" (don't ask me where that came from!)

    Apr 12, 2010
  • Research Re: Pregnancy

    Question here for you. Is there any way to stimulate milk when the girl isn't pregnant?

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: School

    How very interesting. I have very little to add to the review.

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Archive Re: LOSS - League Of ShapeShifters

    Anye: I wondered, as I heading for the pickup, who would be the next to shift. Would it be me? Could just touching an animal make the change happen? Bro. ...

    Apr 2, 2010


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