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"Broken Arrow" was the name outsiders gave this place. To the dozen weasels sprawled on rock ledges, it was home. If hunger doesn't kill me, Cross mused, boredom will. She ...

I'll add my thanks to that.

Jack: Somewhere around Tess's piece, my fingers started tapping the drumhead. All of them were good; the back of my mind teased me a little. What was I doing here ...

Not a bad piece, but there are some errors. A material that was now forbidden to be produced. This here is a bit unwieldy. Try making it a part of ...

Well, yes, I'm going to resume writing...

A more recent entry to this... Bridge to Terebithia. They fairly well ignored the author's story and put in some nice special effects. If you want a movie adaptation of ...

Have one thing to point out. A!, I think you must've been holding down the shift key. No worries!

Ah well, the vagrancy of fate. So, just a question from curiosity: Are you familiar with the Redwall book series? Well, aside from that, welcome to the site. I hope ...

Jack- I was hardly aware of the impatient tugging at my sleeve. "Bonnington--" As one tune flowed into another, I found myself tapping a beat on my trouser seam. The ...

By the way, I caught two small mistakes here. The first, in the title, is "and" in place of "an". After that, where it says investors would clamber to help ...

All that's true. In fact my family has a set of the encyclopedias you described.

Name: Jack Bonnington Age: thirteen and a half. Instrument: African hand drums. blond hair, bleached almost white. A ruffled look that speaks of seagoing experience. Personality: A prankster, but devo

I guess you'll do.

Hey, Hero, this was great. I did have one little problem with it, though. Towards the end you started to tell it like a history book: just the facts. Because ...

Hello there, Chetan. I'll just help you with a few errors. He is fast on his path as extreme speed of a car. In his way he studies position of ...