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Re: Run with the Pack
It's been one of those days. Nothing seems to go right- especially when you suddenly morph into a wolf. Now you're on the run with nowhere to go. You join ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Run with the Pack
It's not easy being a werewolf. Most of the time you're shunned by human and wolf alike. You've been running from place to place and finally end up with a ...
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Re: Too Darn Hot
*puts in two cents* I think maybe the most important thing to remember is that you're writing a story. It still has a conflict (whether it ties into the romance ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Bonjour, Hola, Konichiwa, Aloha, Hello, etc
Hello there. I'm usually called Stori, as you can see. Welcome aboard, and I hope to see you in the forums (fora?) and chat..
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1
Perhaps I can be of some help. where doing there every day routine; In this case the proper spelling is "were" and "their." It's an easy mistake, so don't be ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
*save a spot*
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: The Lazy Dog
"Well, this is it," Keona muttered. A soft yap of agreement sounded at her feet. She smiled, which did much to lighten her travel-stained face. Tired hazel eyes reread the ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Learning Curve Part 1
This leaves me wanting more. Is there any? Most of all, he was tired of it beating him at Chess. Very amusing. He had been stuck on his ship now ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Saving Matty [1]
When was the last time you "emitted" someone inside?
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Title, anyone?
I am not sure if this should be posted here, but... what does the title "Cat and Run" suggest to you?
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Common Cliches?
Er, do orphaned heroes count? One does tend to see many of those.
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Birds of a Feather
Hey, just wanted to point out a small mistake. anyones. Don't forget to use the ' here.
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Mirror Miko (Short Story)
There were fewer bamboo trees here, lesser leaves Perhaps "fewer leaves" would sound better? Without the wind, some bamboo managed to creak and groan, It's just me, but I think ...
Nov 12, 2010 -
Re: The Never Ending Story 1
Jinx Interesting. The one called Tommi gave a little start, then looked up at the others. I must've disturbed some bit of trash. The dog's eyes snapped onto me, and ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: End of the Year Thoughts
"At though"? Don't forget to fix this.
Nov 1, 2010
