Stori

I guess I should mention Watership Down

Er, how are you going to develop the zombies' character?

Good to see you again, Cat. [He stared ahead, his gnarled fingers drummed an impatient beat on the steering wheel. I think you may need to edit. Either change "drummed" ...

Stori here to offer assitance. Right off the bat I could see you have a problem with run-ons. Trying readind this out loud and you'll see what I mean. now ...

You certainly can.

It's nice to meet you, Sita.

*thinks he might know your user-name* Oh well, welcome (back) to YWS. I also enjoy role-playing, so I hope to see you in Storybooks.

Hi Lofty, welcome to the site. Be sure to check out the chat!

Travis- 14 My tongue lolled as I looked on. However, my amusement was short-lived as one of the she-wolves had scented me. "What is this, a free-for-all?" she snarled. I ...

I don't understand this at all. Can someone give me a hand?

You have some very good points there. Of course, one very common element in fiction is dragons. (I think every culture on Earth has myths about them.) Now, the great ...

Hello Purple, I thought I'd help you out. grandfathers Don't forget to add an apostrophe to possessives. It looks like this: ' ‘Stupid old man.’ He thought The usual way ...

passed all the creatures This should be "past". He took his place on the thrown "Throne" rather than "thrown" is the right word here.

Jinx "Pardon me for eavesdropping. I could not help myself." With an easy motion, I jumped from the roof where I'd been hiding. "This is fantastic-- the first time our ...

How about calling it a 'Sandbox'?