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Re: New
Welcome to both of you, then.
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Avari
Thank you, Emma. Just for the record, Avari is male.
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Does this work?
Ok, so the race I created has a natural salve they used to treat wounds and prevent infection. I'm just wondering if there are any species of animals that produce ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: The History of Windriders
Hello. I'll be pointing out a few minor mistakes here. Nims usually fly to low This should probably read "too low to" over the four moons she weaved, "Weave" is ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Avari
Was this it? Had I come all this way just to perish? I shook my head, determined to drive such thoughts away. Mirages swam on the horizon; I thought I ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: In the shadow and out to the light
Hello there, I'm Stori. We're a very friendly lot, so don't be afraid to ask questions.
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Working with Anthromorphic Animals.
That's a good idea. In Dinotopia they have a whole "footprint alphabet" so the dinosaurs can write things down. For fighting, hooves and teeth work perfectly well.
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Choices Chapter 2
Don't be mistaken, Perhaps you mean "don't get me wrong". Even though, I was about to do I'd drop the comma. It doesn't fit in the sentence. he was tryingg ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Rat Tails- Open to all
Stitches: "Worse than that tail of yours?" I inquired. The fellow they called Just swung to face me. "What's a civilized rat like you doing here?" "Oh, I like to ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Claire and Gray - Yellow
This doesn't sit well with me. After all, Harvest Moon has always been a family thing.
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Set in Stone
That stupid emerald is trying to steal my thunder. Never mind that I'm a diamond, set in fourteen-karat gold. Never mind that she's one of several stones in a bracelet ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. President
Hear, hear! I also think it helped that the olden-day presidents were working men. These days... not so much.
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Golden Waters (a Civil War short story)
I'd just like to point out something. Even the most person doesn't normally write in their diary every day; maybe spacing out the days a little will make this more ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Heavensent
Ms. Crandall addressed her students in her resonant voice. "Today we will be studying literature. Please open to-" A cheerful male tone interrupted. "Is this the Canterbury Female Academy? I ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Books??? I need some....
Pendragon by D.J. MacHale is worth reading. There are ten books, I'm fairly sure, each dealing with a different territory.
Feb 5, 2011
