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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Earthly Angels - Bookstore/Dream scene.

    It seems you're in need of a review. “Bookends”. It's usually ok to put the period inside the quotation marks- thus, "Bookends." He was at the cash register, ringing someone ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey, just joined! :D

    Hello there. I hope you don't like to be called 'Evil'? Anywise, here's a little recommendation. See if you can find a book called Song of the Gargoyle.

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm a newbie!

    Hello Logan! As it happens, I was born in North Carolina. You'll find that most everyone's friendly around here. Don't hesitate to ask questions. Also, we have a chat room ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: For the Better Chapter One

    I see you've fallen prey to the No-Setting Bug. Adding a few details about New York- like whether the chapter is set in New York City or in the country- ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Research Re: Parchment

    My question is, what are some of the materials that were used before paper was invented?

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: League of Shapeshifters (LOSS)

    In a little town of no consequence, teenagers are discovering the ability to change into animals. Now their mission is to find a cure for a friend. This storybook will ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: At Dark Forest Gates

    Ancient, mist-shrouded timbers faded into view. Veil Sixclaw squared his shoulders. The fatal wound faded to a dull ache as he neared Dark Forest's gates. "No one to meet me- ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Touch- Home

    The Burks' cat is trying hard to convey a thought: Pet me. His green eyes plead silently; his tail waves lazily. I laugh and scratch behind his black ear. "Are ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Shorter Stories

    Tsk. Do you not know that 'travellers' is perfectly acceptable British?

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: An Alternate Ending to Frankenstein

    I'm not sure whether you noticed, but you say the boy lost one sneaker. Did they wear sneakers in Frankenstein's day?

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: How to Introduce your Protagonist

    One method is to begin in the middle of the story. Then the conflict and protagonist are introduced both at once.

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Longer paragraphs

    I have a problem with this. How do you flesh out paragraphs so they don't all end up being one to three sentences?

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Other Re: Dear People...

    Fiction, that was brilliant. And angel I had never even met before An angel; I'm sure this was just a typo. to chang someone's life. Change. Thus ends my spelling ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Research Re: Does this work?

    Thank you; that was most insightful.

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Why yes, I am new :D

    So you're a Christian, Savannah? We have a 'Christian Writers' group here; feel free to investigate. 'Round here we're very informal. There aren't any strict rules about where to post ...

    Feb 12, 2011


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