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Re: Earthly Angels - Bookstore/Dream scene.
It seems you're in need of a review. “Bookends”. It's usually ok to put the period inside the quotation marks- thus, "Bookends." He was at the cash register, ringing someone ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Hey, just joined! :D
Hello there. I hope you don't like to be called 'Evil'? Anywise, here's a little recommendation. See if you can find a book called Song of the Gargoyle.
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm a newbie!
Hello Logan! As it happens, I was born in North Carolina. You'll find that most everyone's friendly around here. Don't hesitate to ask questions. Also, we have a chat room ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: For the Better Chapter One
I see you've fallen prey to the No-Setting Bug. Adding a few details about New York- like whether the chapter is set in New York City or in the country- ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Parchment
My question is, what are some of the materials that were used before paper was invented?
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: League of Shapeshifters (LOSS)
In a little town of no consequence, teenagers are discovering the ability to change into animals. Now their mission is to find a cure for a friend. This storybook will ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: At Dark Forest Gates
Ancient, mist-shrouded timbers faded into view. Veil Sixclaw squared his shoulders. The fatal wound faded to a dull ache as he neared Dark Forest's gates. "No one to meet me- ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The Touch- Home
The Burks' cat is trying hard to convey a thought: Pet me. His green eyes plead silently; his tail waves lazily. I laugh and scratch behind his black ear. "Are ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Two Shorter Stories
Tsk. Do you not know that 'travellers' is perfectly acceptable British?
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: An Alternate Ending to Frankenstein
I'm not sure whether you noticed, but you say the boy lost one sneaker. Did they wear sneakers in Frankenstein's day?
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: How to Introduce your Protagonist
One method is to begin in the middle of the story. Then the conflict and protagonist are introduced both at once.
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Longer paragraphs
I have a problem with this. How do you flesh out paragraphs so they don't all end up being one to three sentences?
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Dear People...
Fiction, that was brilliant. And angel I had never even met before An angel; I'm sure this was just a typo. to chang someone's life. Change. Thus ends my spelling ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Does this work?
Thank you; that was most insightful.
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Why yes, I am new :D
So you're a Christian, Savannah? We have a 'Christian Writers' group here; feel free to investigate. 'Round here we're very informal. There aren't any strict rules about where to post ...
Feb 12, 2011
