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"So, who was it? Mom had a way of hovering when she wanted to know something. "My friend from the park. I said I'd bring her to the concert." I ...

"Mia, look at this." Kalen had a newspaper open to the local section. She'd marked her place with a finger. The headline read, 'Couple claims cat girl as their own.' ...

Stitches: This was getting more interesting by the minute. He hovered in the background while Basil and Pip argued. "Next time, you better not 'forget' or I'll have your tail ...

Gray’s face seemed drawn, but his eyes smiled. “I have good news. My father agreed to send men to infiltrate the slavers’ camp.” He leaned against a column for a ...

Hi Dani, 'tis a pleasure to have you here. Seeing as you write "realistic" romance, I'd be more than happy to have a look.

Hey there Lightning. I hope you enjoy your time here immensely. Also, that is one cool user-name.

Thank you very much, Merlin.

Anye- His quarters long since spent, he drifted towards the exit. A couple of teenagers lounged in the doorway. With a murmur of "Excuse me," Anye left the arcade. I ...

Hello Jessa, what's cooking? I don't have a twin, but I do have six siblings. It can be interesting. Don't forget to join the chat on occasion. The link's on ...

We don't bite- unless asked to.

You might try showing the cats leaving their camp. The Gathering may be routine to the Clans (and readers), but a newcomer to "Warriors" might be confused.

White-ear reviewed the patrol and flicked his tail with approval. "You lot look ready for anyth- stand still, Daypaw!" The apprentice in question grinned. "Sorry. Like you said, I'm ready ...

True.

The town's sole arcade was buzzing with more than video-game sounds. "It was really weird," someone said. "I felt cold all over. Next thing you know... I'm an animal!" "You ...

The only thing I could find to point out was that you tend to put a period outside the () after you already have an endmark. You'll see what I ...