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Hey there, fellow writer! I would dearly love to see the woman's healing process. That is, if you ever decided to extend this piece. I see it's already been reviewed, ...

It's usually considered bad taste to type in capital letters.

Morgan- They never minded. With horses, you could be yourself and not have to talk incessantly. She stroked the mare's flank, breathing in the smell of horse. Were those unshed ...

It's merely a pet peeve of mine, but writing down dreams that the character forgets is kind of frown-worthy.

"Here, you can be the cat this time." Beryl glanced at his brother, who was studying something as usual."C'mon, Case, what have you got this time?" Casey held up a ...

That's a good question, Lav. The Ciana are the race of feline people. It's supposed to have an accent on the I, but that will take some doing.

First of all, you should always start a new paragraph each time someone speaks. I'll show you an example. “Hey tree hugger, what are you up to?" “Just waiting for ...

the pain that had plagued him since. Since when? he usual place at the table That's "her" usual place. I think you manage to tell a very complete story in ...

A living sword is forged in the past. Now it's found its way into the hands of a dishonest man.

This is basically the same as the contests where you use words from a table. Only you write words on notecards or whatever and put them in a can. Or ...

I'm not sure this belongs in Historical Fiction. If you were to ask a mod, they'd be happy to move it for you. And the chewed, weather worn, plastic Igloo ...

In the semi-darkness, a rat's claw scraped against the rock wall of the tunnel. Nothing but shadows waited the unwary traveler- shadows and holes. Beryl screwed up his courage. ‘There’s ...

As the last notes faded, I found myself wiping my eyes. Dear Lord, thank you. That was exactly what I needed. Beside me, Jim was stretching and reaching for Grace’s ...

It's me again, Tail. Here goes. feeling strangely familiar Do you mean that her surroundings are strangely familiar? She was in the maid uniform What does it look like? This ...

Tail, Tail.... he was clearing used to giving orders. Remember? It's 'clearly'. The effect was strangely fearsome, There's no need to repeat 'strangely' here. Perhaps there's another word that would ...