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Re: It Means Nothing (version two)
Lauren, this is a very interesting piece, not least because it doesn't involve zombies. “Let’s keep it moving, Rayn,” Why is it unacceptable to spell "Rain" properly, when used as ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Will O' The Whisp
adventurous spirit he was Don't forget the comma here- thus "adventurous spirit that he was," when the World was young Unless 'the World' is the name of your realm, there's ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)
Is there any way one can reorder the first journal?
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Wyvern
I hate to rain on your parade, but please don't ever separate a sentence into individual words. It's annoying and childish.
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Terra Rhune
Hello there Jojo. an endless blanket of ancient sunsigh trees I already love the name 'sunsigh.' Maybe a blanket isn't the best metaphor, though. before the recollection of time. We ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: WriterFeed Pad Accounts
I just have one question. How do you export your documents? I tried, and something happened to the file.
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Island Geography
I know this will sound weird coming from a Floridian. Be that as it may, what are some ways to create a convincing island? The one I have in mind ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: My "Writer's Block"
Biv- you should remember, it won't ever be perfect on paper. I have the exact same problem. Usually I find just writing things down helps.
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: when the morning light comes.
I agree about breaking this into stanzas. That can be tricky, but it shouldn't be much trouble. Also, I like how this poem doesn't quite rhyme. I often ruin a ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Hold onto your hats everyone, because...
Why, Crock, imagine seeing you here. ;)
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: In West Philadelphia, I was born and raised...
Welcome to our world. We have a few musicians around, so let's hope you fit in. Of course, everyone is very friendly. (If they act grumpy, it's just them.) Hope ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Babel
If nobody believes in God anymore, Allen Winter thought, why are they building this tower? He shook his head, graying hair flopping over into his eyes. They hadn’t officially named ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Country, Really?
When I hear a country song, One thought comes in my head. Just one more twangy baritone, And I'll soon be dead! They like to sing 'bout heartbreak, And other ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 1)
Hello my friend! I just saw your post on my wall, so forgive my tardiness. Seeing as you already had the grammar reviewed, I'll talk about the content. First of ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Writing Horses Well
I just have one question. In Eragon, at one point they have Saphira lift the horses and fly them across the river. In ordinary circumstances (without a telepathic dragon-rider), wouldn't ...
Apr 8, 2011
