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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: It Means Nothing (version two)

    Lauren, this is a very interesting piece, not least because it doesn't involve zombies. “Let’s keep it moving, Rayn,” Why is it unacceptable to spell "Rain" properly, when used as ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Will O' The Whisp

    adventurous spirit he was Don't forget the comma here- thus "adventurous spirit that he was," when the World was young Unless 'the World' is the name of your realm, there's ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)

    Is there any way one can reorder the first journal?

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Wyvern

    I hate to rain on your parade, but please don't ever separate a sentence into individual words. It's annoying and childish.

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Terra Rhune

    Hello there Jojo. an endless blanket of ancient sunsigh trees I already love the name 'sunsigh.' Maybe a blanket isn't the best metaphor, though. before the recollection of time. We ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: WriterFeed Pad Accounts

    I just have one question. How do you export your documents? I tried, and something happened to the file.

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Research Re: Island Geography

    I know this will sound weird coming from a Floridian. Be that as it may, what are some ways to create a convincing island? The one I have in mind ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Research Re: My "Writer's Block"

    Biv- you should remember, it won't ever be perfect on paper. I have the exact same problem. Usually I find just writing things down helps.

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: when the morning light comes.

    I agree about breaking this into stanzas. That can be tricky, but it shouldn't be much trouble. Also, I like how this poem doesn't quite rhyme. I often ruin a ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hold onto your hats everyone, because...

    Why, Crock, imagine seeing you here. ;)

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: In West Philadelphia, I was born and raised...

    Welcome to our world. We have a few musicians around, so let's hope you fit in. Of course, everyone is very friendly. (If they act grumpy, it's just them.) Hope ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Babel

    If nobody believes in God anymore, Allen Winter thought, why are they building this tower? He shook his head, graying hair flopping over into his eyes. They hadn’t officially named ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Country, Really?

    When I hear a country song, One thought comes in my head. Just one more twangy baritone, And I'll soon be dead! They like to sing 'bout heartbreak, And other ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 1)

    Hello my friend! I just saw your post on my wall, so forgive my tardiness. Seeing as you already had the grammar reviewed, I'll talk about the content. First of ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Writing Tutorials Re: Writing Horses Well

    I just have one question. In Eragon, at one point they have Saphira lift the horses and fly them across the river. In ordinary circumstances (without a telepathic dragon-rider), wouldn't ...

    Apr 8, 2011


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