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Why is it that he's dressed for the day, but has his chest bare? Is that his usual attire?

Wow. I've yet to see a story like this where the main character wasn't bitter about their situation. The first thing I'd like to point out is your dialog. It's ...

I paced back and forth in my bedroom, half agitated and half despairing. Why did I feel all alone, all of a sudden? I thought, pausing in front of my ...

Have you not heard of the novel forums? For a certainty, if you post there it will be much easier to organize your work.

What you've got here is like the story's skeleton. Filling in details would help to bring it to life. On December 23, 1929 about two months after the stock market ...

"You know," Timothy remarked, "this is the first Festival we'll be attending alone since the twins were born." Christa smiled. "The whole purpose of Festival is bring all of us ...

Consider yourself nudged. Welcome back, Monki.

Hello there. I'll simply point out a few errors. all at the same tempo Tempo usually refers to the timing and speed of a piece of music. Perhaps you meant ...

Don't forget the most important rule of dialog! Always start a new paragraph for each speaker. “Yes I can.” and the speakers made their weird dinging noise. Ok, this could ...

A very warm welcome to you, Cairo.

Hello there Sarah. We're a fairly friendly nation, and not prone to launching rockets at you.

This is a great idea. I've been thinking of writing a story about a kangaroo-like people. Feel free to use this idea.

The tip that comes to mind is "Trust your demon."

What's most annoying to me (actually two things): *The King James bible's lack of quotation marks. *People who use commas instead of full stops or semicolons. Is this a new ...

How does one save the log while using the new chatroom?