Stori

That first poem was simply incredible.

What can I say? Even boys succumb to the "I'm not pretty enough" bug.

Me thinks this could use some help. ''i love daughter. Don't forget, "I" is always capitalized. Don't ask me why, though. when you saw only one set of footprints, This ...

I don't mean to advertize anything, but. If you read "Ethan of Athos", you'll find a main character from an all-male society. Maybe reading such a book would be helpful?

One thing that I like: you're captured the dialect perfectly.

In an ideal world, books would all be free. Unfortunately, this world isn't ideal. My vote goes with bound books (or codices, to use the formal term).

I don't know much about that kind of writing, but. You can most certainly liven things up by adding specific incidents. You don't have to detail them exactly; just write ...

While there may be a giant asteroid impact, I would rather think not. Clearly this planet can be redeemed; there is no need to believe the worst. If the worst ...

How odd is that? I also have a brother who got engaged, under similar circumstances. On the subject: She and Adam have been dating for almost three years and she's ...

You've done something that's hard to do: got me interested in a school story. I'll read the rest of it and hopefully give you a good review.

Today? I started the story that's been bugging me since last night.

It isn't my favorite, but I hear Christian music all the time. *folks are playing it now*

Funny how no men serve as greeters. Anyway, a million welcomes to you.

Hello, Zone! As you can see, I'm Stori. While this is a fairly large site, we try to be as welcoming as possible. Any questions you may have can be ...

I'd say this would be more effective if you actually stopped the rhymes after "one more rhyme." That's only myself, though.