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I haven't greeted you yet? Shame on me! (Just kidding; of course I have.) In any event, welcome to the Society.

Name: Zaairen or Zaair Age: 120 Gender: Male Race: Black dragon Rank: none Allegiance: his human friend, Amelia Appearance: Rather slim for a dragon; Zaair has few of the horns ...

Good job in creating a likable protagonist.

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A bit of detail here might do wonders- things like the ship's name or the time of day. dress that reflect the light I'm fairly sure this ought to be ...

How old is the main character? Is he a boy or is she a girl? The knowledge that this book held will be forthcoming for my duty. That is what ...

Good job, Hannah! Keep doing what you do.

I'm always available for a Warriors fiction.

Okay, I've found a very few spelling errors in this piece. Or for Other Importance Purposes- most likely you meant "Important"? the thing of the past but its roots still ...

People around here don't bite... hard. We're a good lot to know, especially if you go for the almost-crazy type. Oh yes! Nate recently set up "global discussion" forums if ...

It's good that you don't habitually ride alligators. (Although, it might make an amusing children's tale.) 'Round here everyone is a bit eccentric; seems all writers are. When you'd like ...

Often people call this the best writing website out there. We all hope that's true, or how would we stay in business? Anyway. See how it says you have so ...

It was nice to owe loyalty to no one. Spark woke to the sun slanting down onto his red-furred flank. He stretched, reveling in this most precious of gifts. I’ve ...

I'd say your English is very good. 'Round here we encourage everyone, so don't be afraid to ask for help. What you should know is that we ask members to ...

Good job keeping this suspenseful. They lived the span of three United States states away from it, so Clay knew that they must have The States vary a lot in ...