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  • Welcome Mat Re: new

    Welcome to the Society, Belief. Most likely you'll find us to be helpful, friendly and somewhat insane. (We suspect that all writers are.) Don't let that scare you; we never ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: 317 (1)

    Hello there, Storyweaver. I just wanted to point out something. A very few times you switched tenses- it's an easy mistake, and hopefully just as easy to fix.

    Sep 3, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Twins.

    I salute you for having no spelling or grammatical errors. Er... what else can I say? It's well written, and offers an inside perspective on twins.

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Messed Up My Novel

    So how many chapters are more than several?

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: SPEW

    In other words, every has their own explanation.

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Archive Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*

    Zaair Praise be- you're alive! He was sure Amelia heard, but didn't care. While Celosia reassured the soldier, he readied himself for flight. Perhaps the humans really would take his ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi. I'm new and I love you.

    Good that you like Lord of the Rings. One gets the feeling that most people have no time for the classics. Anyroad, welcome to YWS. We're a friendly if somewhat ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie

    Welcome to the Society, Skye. We like to think we're the best writing website out there... but let's not get ahead of ourselves. If ever you're in trouble, ask someone ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Tell me what you think. I wrote this yesterday.

    How do you do, Winston? We here at the Society hope you'll find everything to your liking. Be sure to visit the chat when you have a free moment. You ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*

    Zaair "I am uninjured, but-" he ducked a swipe of the green's tail- "you shouldn't be here." Amelia took in the scene and shook her head. "Then neither should you." ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*

    Zaair- Palace Courtyard He'd been forgotten, it seemed. With a low growl, Zaair yanked the shaft out of his leg. The wound was minor, though it'd take awhile to replace ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Archive Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*

    Zaairen Make that “dragons,” Zaair thought with an inward chuckled. The two healers hadn’t spotted him, crouched as he was behind the throne-room windows. So curious that two-legs didn’t prefe

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hiyaa :)

    Hello there, Priceless. It's a good name you've chose, since we're all priceless in a way. You being Muslim doesn't bother me. After all, this planet was made for people ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Please Gather Around!!

    Hello there, Gatherer. I'm also a bit of a fantasy nut, though I'll read sci-fi and realistic fiction. Even non-fiction. I'm a Christian, just to let you know. That only ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Untitled

    Hello. someones life that will be life changing. There are two problems with this phrase. Firstly, "someone's" should have an apostrophe. (No wonder people just use the mark...) Secondly, repeating ...

    Aug 13, 2011


Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.
— Joseph Campbell