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In a clearing was a small, stone chapel. The building was a small affair with a steeple and empty glass windows. The inside of the chapel was small, looked to ...

The trees were bending back in forth, the owl’s whistled spookily. Not a gigantic error, but it should be 'back and forth.' Also, that apostrophe isn't needed here. where rule ...

Greetings, Catlover. I wanted to point out two places where you left out a space- Thank you, StarClan!Glowing Nettleleaf added,at least they know Also, would Owlstar bring that many warriors ...

Hello there, Unmarked. It's great that you write mystery; we don't have a mystery forum per se, but your work should fit into one of the categories. Welcome aboard and ...

She didn’t say it out loud, but I was nearly 100 percent sure that my mother was not happy with me. It was either that, or the waiter had put ...

Hello there, Hermes. I noticed right away that you have trouble with tenses, so let's have at it. Her parents were gone for three days. She gets out of her ...

A local charity came up with a scheme to send 16- to 20-year-olds out to a rural farm. Through whatever twist of fate, you've been enrolled in the program. You've ...

I'll just get right into the review. This promises to be an interesting read. “Step away from the edge young man. I don’t want anyone to get hurt. If you ...

Greetings and good evening, Alex. We're not a resort (yet), but the Society does its best to make everyone feel at home. There are groups for just about everything, and ...

Hello there. I sat in my room listening to the sound of the dryer fan vibrating underneath my bed mixed with the bursting music coming from my laptop. This is ...

If after this we have a Tropical Storm Snoink, I'll be worried.

I hear what you're all saying. And Spinelli, what you said makes me think of Benjamin Franklin's words. Those that give up a little liberty to gain safety deserve neither.

I'd just like to point out something. It seems to me that, no matter what's popular, it's difficult to find outstanding works by Christian authors. Maybe it's due to them ...

I know this sounds simplistic, but wouldn't it be acceptable to post your work after you've been graded on it?

“Michigan boy, huh” she said, smiling. “That’s where I’m from. There are two mistakes here. A comma goes right after 'huh' and you're missing the end quotes. Overall, this was ...