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You could say that, Ink.

This is one of my pet peeves when using the computer to write. I'll usually choose a boring or irrelevant title just so the document can be saved. Does anyone ...

One thing you should keep in mind is that even a pure-hearted person has flaws.

Howdy, Mr. Blog. It's rather unusual to post works in the welcome forum. Where are you from? What are your interests besides writing?

So you're a woodworker? I am too; hope to see you around the site.

Revenge of the Sith. 'Nough said.

Seeing how everything else is covered, I just wanted to point this out. His white cheeks blossomed pink as he realized that he’d just admitted to spying. This sentence is ...

Yes, I would.

I noticed that you sometimes switch to present tense. It shouldn't be hard to find and correct. Also, arrows are kept in a quiver; he wouldn't pull one from his ...

Then he who seemed the most powerful of all of them kneeled on one knee next to me and spoke. The past tense of 'kneel' is actually 'knelt'. His voice ...

Hey there, Guy. Before I point out any mistakes, remember- each time someone new speaks, it helps to start a new paragraph. For instance- I am so sorry I failed ...

There's a classic example of a selfish character- Ebenezer Scrooge. Maybe it would help to read about him?

Good job, though I noticed you put an unnecessary space before a comma several times.

I congratulate you on choosing such a bold user name. :D We're all slightly insane here, and suspect that all writers are.

Hello there, Writersdream! Since you were in chat recently, I'd just like to reassure you that it isn't always like that! As C said, we're about the friendliest people on ...