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Well. I role-play a bit, it's true. Some of my hobbies are drawing, reading and watching anime. I'm a big .Hack fan. :D

Blaze He ipmatiently pawed the ground. Isn't it time to leave? he thought. The alpaha seemed to read his thoughts. "Patience," he said. "We leave as soon as the moon ...

Let me just say, that was amazing.

Nice picture. Do the characters have names?

I'll make this quick. It's my first year on YWS, and I love it. A few shoutouts: JustCloudless: Welcome aboard! Hope to see your work soon. Sachiko: Thanks for all ...

Very good. It flowed well and the rhyme scheme was great.

It's very good. Keeps the reader going.

I sang my part without once looking at the words. They came as naturally as breathing after three years in the Riveroak Choir. The choir teacher, Mrs. Monroe, applauded. "Excellent," ...

That was an interesting story. Maybe you could call it "The Reluctant Santa." About the critique, I can't see any obvious errors. Good job.

It says that the trees on Grandma's lawn had no leaves. That's "bare," not "bear." And "there" should be "their." Other than that, good work.

Granted, but then everything gets dull. I wish I had my own computer.

I would suggest Erin Hunter. It's actually a pen name for three people.

I live in Florida, so I never have a snow day. Here we have hurricane days, which are no fun.

I like it. No errors I could see.

The original is really cool. Do you know who the artist is?