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Oh, that's encouraging. "You can't write? Go start a role-playing game and forget about it!" Ok. Having finished my rant, I'd just like to say "welcome." If you need help, ...

For a piece of fiction, this sure is written in formal language.

Name: Jorin Age: 16 Gender: male Education: freshman at Challenger school. Family: mom and dad, three brothers and three sisters Appearance: about 6", straight brown hair, blue-green eyes. Personality

Ok, why do I see nothing but an emoticon?

Before anyone says anything they'll later regret, I like this.

This could use some punctuation, but otherwise it's cool.

This could easily be a theme song to an anime, I think. Don't quote me on that though.

Wow, that was powerful writing.

"Hmm... now where did I bookmark that page?" Kyte mutters. He glances up, notices InYourMind, and smiles. "Hi there."

Are you still accepting submissions?

We ought to get along well. I read the first two Temeraire books. Writing-wise, I mostly do fantasy. I've also dabbled in realistic and science fiction. Whew... Anyway, see you ...

This needs a heck of a lot of punctuation. Take a look at the school for instance. "Sleeping you were sleeping" See what I mean?

There are a few spelling errors. "Every morning I rude [should be "ride"] down the driveway." "Then I endure a day of torcher." [should be "torture."] Other than that, it's ...

I am: a writer and an artist. I wonder: where my next idea will come from. I hear: songs in my head. I see: a thousand possibilities. I want: to ...

A very warm welcome to you, Clocks. That's what I'll call you. If you're looking for a good fantasy read, I suggest Auralia's Colors by Jeffery Overstreet. Trust me, it's ...