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Wow, congrats to you Dreamer. Funny, but I was homeschooled until fourth too!

Hi, and congratulations.

This is good, but maybe you should expand it. Tell us more about the "web" you create with writing. Add more about characters, plot, etc

"It's not easy being an enhanced human," Rick muttered. He absently scratched behind his ear. "You think that's tough, try being an enhanced dog," replied his companion, Gabe. "People always ...

Don't forget capitalization. You should capitalize the first letter in each sentence. The Is, too.

One nice thing about Challenger: you get a lot of free time. I finished my assignment, then pulled out a piece of paper and started to draw. As usual, I ...

I think you should flesh this out. Add some longer paragraphs, some description, that sort of thing. Right now, it's kind of boring.

Mr. Quinn's class, finally. We were working on genetics today, which was fine by me. After all, I never did get that stuff in middle school. "Psst. Jorin." I turned ...

You have a few spelling errors here. First, "no wear" should be "nowhere." "strait" should be "straight." Otherwise this is an interesting story.

I think you should change the names. Ray and Kay are so similar, they're bound to cause confusion later on.

I sighed as I took my place in class. "Challenger- what a joke. I'm not being challenged." "Did you say something, Jorin?" Miss Walling had a sort of half-smile on ...

First off, let me say that this is good. And second, "Every tricks" should be "every trick."

I was in 4-H, but sadly I can't answer your question. See, I never actually got to see the judging. Having said that, I can tell you that I had ...

I agree, showing respect is important.

Hi Nehad. I've never met an Egyptian before, so I'm doubly happy to meet you. Hope to see you around the site.