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It's cool, Jabs. Write, by all means.

Awesome, girl. I laughed the whole way through. One thing I noticed, though, is you tended to end dialog with a comma, then launch into another sentence. Like this- "Get ...

Wait a sec while I register. Name: Anye Form: animal- black panther battle- he grows claws and fangs, and has enhanced vision and smell. Description: long blond hair, green eyes ...

Christan. Why do you ask?

True. I'll see what I can do. Nervous as heck, that's me. They insisted I come, even if I don't know what dances are in style. "Go out there and ...

Ok, y'all, I'll open the ring. You decide the match-ups, but run them by me of Shooting-Star.

For all you Sci-Fi buffs, it's a contest between shape-shifting creatures. Rules: 1. You get two forms: one animal or mythical beast and a battle form. That means basically an ...

Whoa. Slow down a bit. The whole thing just came to a head at the park scene. Explain that a bit more. What made him stop? Why didn't he care ...

Gulp, Rick thought. This guy's serious. "And you aren't?" Gabe asked, correctly guessing Rick's thoughts. "Sure I am. I can outrun, outsmart, outperform anyone here." He folded his arms smugly. ...

You have a few errors here. Like using "new" instead of "knew." And it should be "of course" instead of "coarse." Besides that, a good work. Unusual title too. :D

It's good. I could actually hear it. Maybe you'll do a recording?

Blaze Dunedogs He stiffened, sniffing the breeze. "There's something going on out there..." The alpha snorted. "You and your nose, Blaze. Does it smell like trouble?" Blaze shook his head. ...

Good job Fangala! The end of the chapter was very suspenseful. I only caught one error, so kudos to you. She thought that bats were kind of cuddle- should be ...

Hi, and welcome to the site. There were a few errors in tense here, but overalll a good poem. If you allow me to loving you, Then I'd told these ...

It's not like you have to stick to science exactly. Make some things up. For instance, you might have a place where certain rules of physics don't apply. Or maybe ...