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Get well soon, Shot.

My dad's a big LOTR fan. Heh. Anyways, if you're going to read The Silmarillion I suggest you get it on tape. Trust me on this one.

'Lo, I'm Kyte. Or Jorin. I'm 16, and I'm a big fantasy nut. When I'm not writing, I like to read and do models. That's about all.

Alisa She felt it again: that sharp, stabbing pain. "Oh... feels like having kits again," she muttered. "Raul, where are you?" Raul "Ah, that hurts," he muttered. The healer assured ...

*frowns at Lold* Anyway, one thing I noticed. Some chapters, you used a double quotation mark, and sometimes a single.

"Do I? Sure, only don't try it while I'm a dragon." Carl Fenton. ('cause I haven't used him in ages!) Do you have acne?

Wow, new users. Thanks guys. Path He was just looking for something to eat. Path grumbled to himself, "These youngsters don't have any manners." There! That rabbit looked nice and ...

I'm Jorin. Pleased to meet you. I'm also interested in anime and art, though I can't draw properly. :( Anywise, welcome to the site.

Le wow. A little late to comment, but that was awesome.

If you've never seen a dragon before, I mean a real dragon, you might think they're monsters. Well, they're not. I can tell you a thing about dragons. My name ...

Your heart is too thread bare, should me "too threadbare."

In the third stanza, I think you had a minor error. All of the world was staring at me. Like I was from a different planet or something. That could ...

Hey, Ayra. First off, let me say I liked this. And second, I notice all the alphas' names begin with B. Was that intentional?

Alisa "Sky's tail, what a mess," Alisa muttered. She'd never let her own apprentice get away with the hodge-podge that Mist kept. Then again, she reflected, Dawn did have her ...

Wow, we have a lot in common. I take tae kwon do, too. And I have six siblings! I'm interested in fantasy, and I make the occasional stab at science ...