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Ok. I'll try some different ways.

Hello. I got a question: how do you all deal with that dreaded block?

I agree about it being cliche; the first words that came to mind were "Code Lyoko." Having said that, though, I still think it's a great idea.

I'd like to try that. Anything to get my writing up again, I'll try. (And how about a group for it, too? There's already a co-writers' group.)

Couldn't help noticing a few comma misuses, so I'll point 'em out. He watched, a spectator in his own body(,) as the snake sinuously made its way forward. The snake ...

You're gonna hate me for this *ducks*, but it reminds of "The Nightmare Before Christms." Really.

An intriguing start, I'd say. You had a few punctutation errors. just like her mother's. Don't forget the old apostraphe! His voice exploded across the silent room; A comma works ...

Nate-sama, you're not really gonna... I haven't done sentence diagramming since sixth.

The captain always goes down with the ship, A semicolon or full stop might be more appropriate, but it's your poem. Overall, it's pretty good.

First critique, great! "Come out," Sunpaw ordered, Semicolon rather than a comma. It's another complete thought. Here too: , a hint of amusement appeared. “Mhm,” Scram said mildly, “But I ...

I checked out your blog. The movie review, that's your work?

Ok, forgvie my ignorance, but what're the square marks for?

Wow, I say wow. Um, not much to offer in review, but I like.

An example... hmm. Supposing I mentioned that Fire Light was my brother. Now, without seeing my name, another user would guess who I am. Sa?

Hello, fellow geek. I'm ok with "Wars" and "Trek," but not obsessive. :wink: 'Nyway, welcome.