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Black Cat, you should've told me you wrote this! Anyway, it's a great piece of work, and I look forward to more like it.

Wow. That's creepy. The first thing I'd like to note is, you change tenses sometimes. So I stand up and she smiles at me Looks likes there aren't any other ...

Having seen that all the grammar things are fixed, I'd like to point something out. First, crocodiles are never green, though for the story it works. And second, if this ...

My favorite books... You asked for it. Auralia's Colors by Jeffery Overstreet. Excellent description and narrative. Inkheart. Surely it needs no explanation. Airborn by Kenneth Oppel. I love the idea.

Well, folks, I could use some help. I'm working on a story where electric power doesn't exist. The problem is, I'm not sure what to replace it with. Thoughts?

Welcome, Ed. (I can call you that, right?) Ok. I'm Kyte, or Jorin. Um... haven't read Twilight. Is there any reason why I should? :)

Hello person. I shall be your reviewer for today. grandma and grandpa Since you're using the titles in place of names, grandma and grandpa get caps. Then why in h** ...

What have I gotten myself into? I wondered. "Um, my name's Chris... you can call me Kin, everyone does." Fanyne's expression was surprised. "Kin, eh? I like it." He gestured ...

Hello, Megan. Most folks 'round here call me Kyte. *shakes hands*

I must be plot blind... didn't realize they were dead till the end. I just assumed the "pretending they weren't there" part was normal. Anyway. The review. You started the ...

I breathed a sigh of relief as the conflict broke up. Note to self: always think before you open your trap, I thought. Speaking of thinking, it seemed I'd accepted ...

Let me be the first to say, this was great. And review, :) Things were the same each year, Eric, my obnoxious... I'd either replace the comma after "year" with ...

Let me be the first to say, this was great. And review, :) Things were the same each year, Eric, my obnoxious... I'd either replace the comma after "year" with ...

Hello new person. I shall be your critiqurer today. First off, you tend to space the 's on possessives, such as: After Jack 's mind went blank See? Next, you ...

Hi, Dynamo. I guess I'll be your reviewer. First off, I think Ryan ought to know more about online games in general. After all he did spend his whole night ...