Stori

Wow. I found a few errors, but most likely it's just translation. Math hour could bring you to the edge of insanity!!! It's just me, but I don't like multiple ...

I'm "kind of" writing: I have an idea, but no inspiration. *hides*

That's funny, 'cause I'm a bookish outcast too... and don't care for sports. Oh, welcome to YWS!

Hey, you guys finished yet? I think he did a good job on Eragon at least.

O-k, first off: I think the whole "mysterious pain" thing is a little cliched. And second, unless Dan is used to dealing with spirits, I think he'd be a lot ...

I'd say, "read Ender's Game." It's awesome.

Well, unusually for me, I couldn't spot any grammar mistakes. So I'll just say, the boy losing his memory is rather abrupt. We don't know why he doesn't remember anything, ...

It's simple: try to write a novel of 50,000 words in a month. (Pretty easy, huh? :o ) As for friends, I don't know how that works.

Actually, the idea reminds me of Revelations. How the human race goes to put under the new government. Maybe you should consider that.

First off, would you be surprised to know that we guys can't figure you girls? It's true. And second, cliches just don't fit the bill. I know because I'm weird.

I'll ask the mutant dinosaur.

I salute you on your attempt, but... won't the humans and aliens know that a war between them would last that long?

Rubric, I agree with you on Eldest. (And hey, it's technically not Eragon, right?)

First off, usually the only place you post work to download is in Advanced Critiques. (I won't tell, but ask a mod to move this.) Second, the critique. Stacey and ...

I'm glad someone entered. I think the others already got the line-by-lines, so I'll just say "Thanks."