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Finally, a Casting Crowns fan! Have you heard "Every Man" yet?

Does anyone else use instant messaging? If so, you can talk to me on YIM or Windows Live.

Hello Belle. As I'm sure you've heard, you should remember to critique two pieces of writing for each one you post. Don't hesitate to ask if you have questions.

Very interesting. How I had grown. I think that needs an exclamation mark. a milk embrace Did you mean "milky?" When we fought, my words reverberated A full stop might ...

Well... I can recommend a few titles. The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss... great fantasy, and it's a long one. Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card... Great look ...

I don't mind biology, but I do not like health class. :( Anyway, welcome to YWS. Hope you like it here.

I guess you haven't heard of him. You'll see.

As I was reading this, I could hear it in my head. That's good. But... I think you should break this up into verses.

"You don't need to see his identification." Star Wars

How can you guys not like writing? Sounds like an oxymoron. Seriously.

The black-and-white cat looks like mine. XD Seriously, you've got talent.

Is it all right if I'm one of the "exceptions"? I'm intrigued.

Whoa! This is a bit much. I'd reccomend either posting in parts, or cutting back a few paragrapghs. He was like the brother she had never had, and like her ...

Ok, first off, I think this needs a LOT more short sentences. 'Cause right now, it's like trying to read the Lord of the Rings. until she didn't breath again ...

That's right, folks. I'll be working on a story about Jax and his pals. Help with a title is appreciated.