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Not bad. Though, I think a blade that long would be unweildly.

By "custom writing," do you mean fan-fiction?

you can eat 'em. Mind you, T. rex isn't very tasty...

Then what's with the Dragon Prime link? *is confused*

I haven't found any grammar mistakes, so you'll be spared that. But... this piece could do with a lot more showing. Know what I mean? Don't say, "I woke up." ...

I tried downloading the files, but I don't know the first thing about "compressed" data. Help, please?

I think one thing you could do is shorten this and put in some more "showing." Otherwise, it's like reading an essay.

Yeah, you could try using commas at the end of dialog.

What you could do... is have magic be a substance. And if a mage uses too much of it too fast, he gets a sickness. Say he tries to lift ...

I don't think you need the explanations for "narrative" and "genre." We're all writers here, after all.

You aren't the only weird person around. I argue with myself. :)

Seriously, the summary makes me want to read the story. Is it posted?

What I wanted to point out is, when I saw '63 in the header, I thought it meant nineteen sixty-three.

You like the Wolf's Rain music? *goggle eyes* Me too, though I'm not crazy about the Spanish track.

I've seen it, but never read it.