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Re: 22 Days
That's awesome, dude. I didn't run across any glaring errors. And it's cool that you're role-playing (is that the right word?) as a space traveler. Keep it up, both of ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Moonlight River
"I'm here." The words sounded weak in Tsukasa's ears. He tried again: "I'm here. That's right. I don't have to go back to that ludicrous world. It's better this way." ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: I feel so proud!
Cat-san, don't be so disrespectful to the spellcheck. :D
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Humanity
I'd listen to that speech. But there were a few errors. we are all human That doesn't present a strong case. You could say that belugas and orcas are both ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
The gate guard eyed their small party, then waved them out. Shad grinned. "Ah, fresh air," Sky sighed. "I was starting to wonder how the townsfolk put up with the ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Welcome, welcome. I'm Kyte, also known as Jorin. It's great to meet you all.
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Sup
Hello there. You've certainly landed on your feet, as the saying goes. I'm Kyte. Don't confuse me for any of my siblings (Fire Light, ClimberSquirrel or Ygaron.) What else? Enjoy ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Greetings all
Welcome to YWS, Dawn.
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: That Voice - Chapter 2
Not bad, not bad at all. I found some errors, but they're easy to take care of. All I felt was the sudden bliss as the pain was suddenly gone. ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter Four
I say, I'm enjoying this too. Although I could point out a few things. First off, I think "Oakwood" is a lame title for a forest. Try thinking of something ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Favorite YWS Writing
I like cat4prowl's Shrouded Sun. (It's in fan-fiction.) And Twit's Scavenger. What else... "Stars" by Sachiko. Favorite members... I don't really have one, but definitely Twit, Sachiko, and Adam Atlan
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
"I guess it's a good thing I was nearby. Who is that guy anyway?" He indicated the giant with a jerk of his chin. "I don't know," Sky said with ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
"I'm Shad. Nice to meet you." He shook hands firmly. "If you don't mind me asking, how did you end up here?" Sky shrugged. "It's a long story. Sure you ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
"Thanks," Shad panted after he'd returned to human form. He eyed the mound of bark. "How long is that likely to keep him down?" "Long enough," Sky gritted. "We can ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Need A Book To Read!
The Giver is pretty good. Or if you like longer reads, there's Auralia's Colors which, in my opinion, is the best book ever. And there's Raptor Red, which is original ...
Nov 18, 2008
