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Re: Owl Wings
Shad's dreams were troubled. He saw the giant menacing Sky, then himself charging to her rescue, only to be mown down by a swipe of his armored hand. He lay ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: the real thing. instead of bad self portraits....
I think they're very good. I wish I could draw half that well. The second and last, I like. Again, well done. I'm sorry I can't give you a proper ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: A Hundred Suns- Blind
*nods* I definitely will, Griff. I just need to finish the second one, "Ash."
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Introduction
Then I studied my reflection, That should be a semicolon. Moving to the side I could help but admire Moving to the side, I couldn't help... That's about all I ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
"Sky... I'm sorry about... back there." He could feel a blush creeping in. "I..." "It's ok. I like you, truly." Sky fidgeted with her dress. As he looked away, Shad ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
Like a dragon, Shad felt a strong urge to protect Sky. He offered his hand to her. "Thanks, I just got dizzy. I'll be fine." Ballow snorted. "I should have ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
Shad's emotions were all a jumble. He felt admiration for Sky, anger at himself for what he'd done, and embarrassment that Ballow should see them hug. He kicked at a ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
Shad groaned. His head ached. Stretching slowly, he found he'd somehow returned to human form. He looked around. Ballow seemed all right, but where was Sky? Sky? Are you there? ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
Shad lunged. He grasped Ballow firmly by the collar and lifted him above the melee. "Sky, kill the giant! What are you waiting for!" he yelled in her mind. "I ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
"Shad, what is it?" Sky asked. "He's got Ballow," Shad said thickly. Sky gasped. "What should we do? We have to help him!" She started to run towards the camp, ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
Shad tossed and turned, unable to sleep. His instincts told him something was approaching. Finally he gave up. Moving quietly, he roused Sky. "What is it?" the elf asked irritably. ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
"Is that so?" Shad asked. "The Mirror is said to reflect the truth of a person's life. Once you see the truth, it changes you forever." Ballow shivered. "It's late," ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
Shad could feel apprehension coming from Sky. He couldn't say what the source was, but it had to do with himself and Ballow. Maybe he should talk with her. But ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Switching viewpoint, person, AND tense?
I read a book that changed perspective between about five different characters. If you want to know what I'm talking about, read Voices of Hope . No, I don't think ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Drawing Tutorials
Thank you Sureal.
Nov 25, 2008
