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Could you take a look at "Blind"? I need some reviews on characters and such.

Here's to experiments! *raises a glass of apple juice*

I get first review, what an honor! The first paragraph pulled me right in. No spelling mistakes, either. (I misspelled "spelling," by the way.) the resulting light spread a faint ...

It's nice to meet you, Mutant. Remember to read the rules, and you should be all right.

In the game, only Ramza and Delita have it. Can I learn it?

Shad slumped against the cold iron bars. "Sky," he whispered. Ballow nudged him. "Don't cave in on me, dragon boy. We have to get out of here." He put on ...

No you aren't. I like it too... when, that is I'm not fighting at Dorter. Name: Joel Level: 5 Job: Thief Job level: 2 Skills: Gil Taking, Steal Heart; Potion, ...

Whatever else happened, I was thoroughly sick of "being" Terrence Rayne. I shifted back to my real form and breathed a sigh. "Not bad for your first try," the instructor ...

I can't write poetry either. I guess it's because I used to think it had to rhyme, which was too constraining. ;) Anyway, I made a few successful ones in ...

You like sleeping? Can you teach me how to sleep? ;) Never mind. Is it nice, living in Australia? What part of the country do you live in?

Hey, thanks for your comment on "Blind." Welcome to the site.

There are so few errors here, I don't know whether to be pleased or disappointed. that kind of darkness was counterfeit and was more real than simply lack of light. ...

I'm trying to keep my work, "Blind," as a short story. But I have so much to tell, it feels more like writing a novel. Help?

Y'all give Heather time to respond. *hands mike to Kitty15*

"I hear a merchant ship docked yesterday," Sal said. "They had the most beautiful gems, or so Myra says." "Didn't you look for yourself?" I asked, and mentally kicked myself. ...