Stori

Whiteraven stretched slowly. "A good day's work," he said to his apprentice. The young gray cat just nodded; he never spoke. "You've been a good apprentice, but there is something ...

I must say, it's good to see a medieval-themed story. They're so few and far between. Dressed for the winter - with a cloak draping him from the neck to ...

Panting, Shad touched down in the forest. "Is she any better?" he asked. "No," said Ballow. His head was hung at a defeated angle. "She may never wake up." "She ...

Now, I'm no flower expert, but are those baby's breath? Or are they Queen Anne's lace?

Perhaps you can help me? I have an Australian character, Bane, whom I'd like some input on. Um... I haven't posted the work here. But I can find it.

I think one thing you need work on here is tense. In the first section... The New Year will start off with a bang. in future tense. However, a few ...

You have several run-on sentences here, which isn't good. There we are sweetheart, he said, "Daddy's here to pick you up." Should be, "There we are, sweetheart," he said. "Daddy's ...

"A true daughter of the Line, eh?" someone says. Alarmed, Bast tries to move away. Jagged pain pulses along her spine, and she gasps. "She's awake now. Don't do anything... ...

"Sky... you didn't have to do that," Shad whispered. Then, turning to Ballow, he said, "Climb on my back as soon as I change; hand her up first." Ballow nodded. ...

I think you posted twice. No matter. I'm Stori, as you can see, but you can call me Kyte. So, what genre do you like? Do you have a favorite ...

I usually look for two things: one, it covers the plot, characters, etc. Two, it doesn't just say "This is a very good story."

*snaps fingers* Nebraska!

North Carolina? I was born in North Carolina.

I think I understand... So, if I wanted to do a "back story" for a character, I might make a one-shot?

I think I need to drop out... I'm busy, and have another storybook to post in, plus running "Blue Guardians." Sorry.