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Re: The Day All the Roses Died
Oh, I like this. It could use some help with punctuation, but that's what I"m here for. :) One day all the roses died. Not all at once, just one ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Oh Society...
"Two and a half kids..." Zahwot? Is that supposed to be a reflection on Americans' obsession with statistics? Anyway. Perhaps this should be longer. Add some more arguments. Spice it ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Critiquing Woes
Well, I don't meant to be rude, But I've not been reviewed. I think it's rather unfair. It's quite a cause to despair. Please, at least drop a star. It's ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: A Hundred Suns- Blind
Update: "Ash" is being stubborn. I'll post what I have very soon, but don't expect much.
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: What does this button do?
You've come to the right place. Haha, I think personally that British writers are better than Americans. (Except for Jack London.) 8)
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
Would you consent to review song lyrics? My work is "Just Like Love" at:
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Black Snow
The wind tosses the leather traces back toward his teammates. Balto won't allow it. He leans hard to the right, straining against the taut leather. Behind him, arranged in a ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Hello
Wait... Teague and Teigue? That could get confusinig. Anyway, welcome aboard.
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Eddy Cullen on the YWS Front Page
He looks for all the world like Igor. Not to be profane, but I'm bloody tired of Twilight.
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: hi...
Hi, Fly! (rhymes, I has them.) Welcome to the Young Writers Society. You ought to fit in very well.. "Most everyone's mad here." JK
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Kite's Journal
I know. How lame is this? Well. Just "well." Actually I'm not very well. I've had stomach-aches, backaches, and about a dozen other ailments. If I were to make up ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Autism, Tourette's OCD: A Misunderstood Truth
Yeah, I've got some of those. If I'm nervous, freaked out, or just plain mad, my throat muscles constrict. Sometimes I grunt or take a deep breath to stop it. ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: The Name's Bond. Ari Bond.
I get to welcome you first? All right! So, you said you liked the color blue. So do I. And you live in Asia; what part of Asia? You should ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Long Patrol
Starr I don't think I could eat anything now, really. Poor cat. The feeling surprises me; why should I care about some mangy kitten? Because you're a medic. You're supposed ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: The three nights
Lord Azinus, this must be fate. The cry~, flows through, the three nights, with all its, ill gotten, might. This needs some restructuring. It works better as, The cry flows ...
Jan 11, 2009
