Stori

Break the words up into smaller paragraphs.

I like to think I have a "phonographic" memory. I can remember anything just as I hear it. How bizarre is that?

:shock: You love "Song in the Silence"? I do too! I'm not sure about the other two though. Where are my manners? Around here I'm known as Kyte.

Perseverance. Plain and simple.

Heart beating. Chest heaving. A scarred face looks back from the water. A torn soul shows in its eyes. Those can't be my eyes! Phoenix. They name me for one ...

I don't believe I've seen text that thick ever. Break it down!

Thank you. It's appreciated. :) not even sure what they want too be Want to be. Don't forget: "too" is also. It never means anything else. I find it hard ...

Right. First of all, never begin a sentence with "and" or "but". This is especially true if it's in the very beginning of a piece, like here: And our bedroom ...

Hi and welcome. Don't forget the rules: review two pieces for each one you post, and avoid chat speech. It shouldn't be a problem.

Seriously, where is the post?

If you like folk music, i would suggest Clannad or Nickel Creek.

Third Day would be my pick.

A victim....! I mean, hello. It's rather quiet around here... Welcome.

*rolls on floor laughing* Seriously. I don't look young for my age. 1.I'm a compulsive writer. I write whenever I have an idea. 2. School is a joke. 3. Anybody ...

Boltage, you need to maintain grammar here.