Stori

That's very good. How did you find it?

Actually, I don't think so. Small dragons haven't been done all that often.

I just have one comment. Please, for goodness sake, don't try to put propehsy in rhyme. >

Ah, that's where you're wrong. I just have a question. What do you mean by the Sixth Form? I've read something like that before.

*blinks* That's quite a nice introduction. As you can see, I'm known as Stori. But you can call me anything as long as you don't call me late for dinner. ...

I can't really critique this, so I'll just say that it might be better without the rhyme. It just sounds a bit to forced.

Ah-ha, the yearbook! *cackles* /me would like to make some shoutouts: cat4prowl: Keep writing. Sachiko: Hope to talk to you again soon. Think: Hope you enjoy the site, and please ...

Welcome Shear! I can call you Shear, right? We have a few rules here you should know about. *Be sure to post three reviews for every piece you submit. * ...

'Ello Woozey. As I was reading this I noticed that you kept jumping between past and present tense. A man walked into a bar. Work's been tough.

Hello Peter. It's always nice to see a new face. :)

'Ello there. I second that welcome. So what do you like to write? Any favorite authors?

Now that... is sad.

No, I'm not.

*used to have an iPod* I should really get another one...

A belated happy birthday! (Better late than never)