Stori

Nobody mentioned that it's sideways. I'm just saying.

O.o the US looks like a nuclear blast zone.

Mine is November 30.

Sounds like historical fiction. Give me a holler when you post the first part.

Oh, a government specialist. I love the smell of baking bread.

Note: first attempt I've made at this story in a while. Cika tested her injured paw. Almost at full strength, she noted with satisfaction. Tomorrow I'll ask Bracken if I ...

Hello Always! There was one small nitpick I wanted to point out. A picture immediately fell out of a house This sounds like the picture is falling out of the ...

Okay, I have something to add. The name "Ben." It doesn't sound like much, but here's the problem. "Ben" often turns out to be the Wise Old Mentor type who ...

And make your descriptions memorable. We're more likely to pay attention to "eyes like emeralds" than "dark green eyes," for example.

lol. Here's one from my story. "You know, you have a beautiful voice." Wolfheart "And you, my love, have a sweet tongue." Applewhisker

Do you feel thoroughly welcomed now? :) Hey, I'm Stori, Kite or Jorin, doesn't matter to me. Just to tell you a bit about myself: I like lots of different ...

Hi Jack. I'm Stori, but you can call me anything. Seriously. I'm an eightheen year-old junior, so we have something in common! When's your birthday?

The passing cars' headlights pick out the glint of an animal's eyes. They blink slowly. In a pause between two cars, its figure can be dimly seen. It's a cat-- ...

That's awesome. Could you do the same for Mia and the other main characters? (Mia's my favorite. :)

Thank you all.