Stori

I like it. Also, if you're doing a medieval piece I think "Emrys" is a good name.

I'll be the judge of that.

For players of "Dark Star" and newcomers, here's the new thread. Recap of the story: two cats, Raul and Teo, have discovered that they are brothers. Alissa, now deceased, is ...

Kari started at the offer, Semicolon. “Hurry.” She repeated. Always, always end the dialog with a comma, like this: "Hurry," she repeated. 27,” Lorna said Spell numbers out if they ...

Note: this is by no means complete. I have several different POV's here. Darkreed "Mousetails," I swore as icy water lapped my belly. Graymoon tried to stifle a laugh. "You ...

By gum, a good poem. I can't really comment but this was excellent.+

o.O What's the name of your native language? Filipino? Sorry. I'm grossly uneducated about world culture. That being the case: I've read a few classics. White Fang, David Copperfield (it ...

Hello there. I'm Stori. Or Jorin. Whichever. So... we know a very little about you. It's going to be fun finding out more.

Am I allowed to save it to my computer?

Sis... how is it that you always end up using my character names? I mean... I actually wrote a story titled "Tara." Or tried to. *sigh* I really, really need ...

Really? I have three cats as well.

Stori strolls into the Tavern. "A sparkling cider, if you please?" "Sure thing," says Bartender Nate. He passes Stori a glass and leans in to comment, "Your new name is ...

Since this is and action scene, you could try using short sentences or even sentence fragments. I'm just saying.

Where to begin... This was a very well-written piece. I didn't find any grammatical errors, so let's concentrate on the writing itself. First. The car swerves down the tiny, winding ...

Rodman Philbrick. Anything by him. Right now I'm finishing The Mighty for the second time. 'Tis awesome. Hm... anything else. Well, if you like Star Wars, try Millennium Falcon or ...