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Is this what they call stream of consciousness? When I first saw that you mentioned school, I thought that was your main focus. But it isn't.

Interesting. Near the end of the poem, you wrote, "Maybe someday he'll open my eyes." Did you mean to say "his eyes" or is this talking about a revalation?

Thank you very much, Matt! If you're interested, check out Triss: A Tale from Redwall by Brian Jacques.

Gem: Drat. Without realizing it, I stared to stand up. Uh-oh, went the dim alarm in my head. I hastily sat down, but the damage was done. Kimber-- I meant ...

Haven't watched it. Sorry. The whales sound awesome.

This movie is very uplifting. Harrison Ford stars as Henry Turner, a man who's been shot and loses his memory. Henry has to reconnect with his wife and daughter, as ...

He he, Mica is empathic. I shall put more of this in later.

I've been here for about three years. I'll check the "joined" date in my profile. Most embarrassing moment has to have been a chat discussion on Tolkien's poetry. I put ...

Thank you! I'll take your advice to heart.

Just a little tip there: some readers aren't likely to be drawn in if your story begins at school. Why? Because there are hundreds of school stories out there, most ...

Working on it. I need to clear something up with El, then I'll post.

Gem: Empty. How could it be empty? I bit back a particularly foul swear word. "Come on, Gem. We're not waiting around here!" Kimber pulled me away. We found a ...

Here it is, cats. Post anything relevant to the story here.

Let's not go off topic! I'm going to post a discussion thread.

Sure, I've been meaning to make a title page for a while. Title: Golden Eyes Summary: Ayer, a young man living in a city devided between mages and non-mages, stumbles ...