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Hello all. I would like to post a quick thought. Has anyone here participated in the Society for Creative Anachronism? (SCA, for short.) If so, please tell me a little ...

Maybe the main character should ask for help from Percy and his friends? It's a good way to show the "fan" element in this work.

It's all good, Ben. Chris: I quickly read the name over the newcomer's head: Peri. "Help us out, Peri!" I hollered. The little fellow inclined his head, then scurried through ...

Jesse: "He's right." The words swirled around me. Not only was Cyla not present, but neither was Raul. I groaned. Please don't tell me they're dallying somewhere. Teo looked up ...

First reply! Ok, the thing I noticed right away: In the beginning of the chapter you slipped into third person. Shanna turned to explain but her father narrowed his eyes ...

If you're interested in katanas, I can help. Trainees with this weapon start out with a wooden sword called a bokken. Instead of the thrusts and parries used for broadswords, ...

Beautiful. As I read this, I could hear it being sung in my head.

What he said. Also, since there are so many races in Star Wars, perhaps you should include a short list.

Darn it. I expected Riley to talk, but not this. Kudos.

So are you reserving that lovely blue shade for administrators?

I need some advice, chaps. My computer's under attack and I don't have the software to stop it! Just now I tried running Windows Task Manager and got a warning.

Well, for one thing the section about each person should be longer. I personally work a lot with multiple perspectives. And about the telling and showing. 'Showing' uses more specific ...

Um.. thanks for the review?

Well, I know a few different kinds. A "jolly boat," "dory," or "ship's launch" is a small craft used as a shuttle between ship and shore. A "ketch" is a ...

Is there a word for a young, unattached female cat? All I know is that a breeding female is a "queen."