Stori

Stori noticed a member sitting by herself. "Hi there," he called an invited her over. "Hi. I'm Ivy," she said. "Stori. What'll you have?"

Calix! I'm so glad to see you again. Hey, this song reminds me of a friend I had a while ago. You captured what it is to miss someone very ...

Not everyone has to start out an expert. I was expecting this to rhyme, but you pleasantly surprised me. Not much to critique here; I'll send you a gift instead.

Chris: Shoot! I pulled back as the monster's arm swung at me. The arm whooshed overhead; I felt my heart speed up. There has to be more to this. But ...

Hey Snoink! You'll be glad to know I read the whole post. Ok, instead of quoting the passage directly, I'll just point some things out. First of all. When you ...

I'm not much of an art critic, but I do have one thing to say. If this were a photo, I'd think the girl had her face pressed against the ...

Not at all. You can even forget my suggestion.

Hello Bugwhisker! I found it kind of amusing that in the fox fight, you had Eagle run "a few fox lengths." Other people may not spot that, but it's good. ...

Do you all think this is a good idea? And do you know any songs about close friends (ballads, contemporary, anything will do)?

Yes, that's it. Have you attended one of the events?

Hey, you're welcome!

*laughs* That was poetry, as Pippin once said! There are just a few nitpicks. 20mnutes gone 20 minutes. And if it's the beginning of a sentence, you usually write out ...

Two minutes, of course!

Seven, or Sevenapw as he used to be known, is a rather ticklish character. See what you all think. What am I doing wrong? I shake my head slowly. Seven, ...

What do I want to do more than anything else? Publish a book. What would I change about society? I'd make it so that people were more accepting of minorities ...