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Re: Calypso
please don't ever leave. I couldn't be alone again now that I've met you. that was sweet, I've never heard of Calypsoo but I'm about to google him/her so I'll ...
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Re: Love. It's all i think about!!
This was cute! Great rhyme although it was a bit short, but it was perfect anyway.
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Re: These Violent Delights (short version)
Wow I totally saw this play out in my mind! Great job! I wanna read the long version now! Kait sounds like a tough girl!
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Re: Together Again
I’m just overreacting and it’s just the branch’s of a tree scraping against my window haha! that happened to me once! I was so terrified! but anyway I like this ...
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Re: Only Hope
I could just feel sorrow, to find that it was all a dream! That's happened to me before and it sucks! I really liked this hope can be like a ...
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Re: Hands of Time
Damn this is a romantic son and I love it. Seems like the person is on cloud nine and honestly who wouldn't want to feel this way. I hope to ...
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Re: Gone With You~Beginning
Family Scare Day? "Don't move." came a deadly sound from my father's driver side window. Everyone's demeanor suddenly changed and we were all quiet. "Give me all your money." demanded ...
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Re: Love
I really liked this, I'm a closet romantic and I felt every moment of this write. To have someone feel this way about you, just makes you feel warm inside.
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Re: Final Goodbye
Once more you left my life and I'm afraid it was my final goodbye I can relate to this greatly. I had a best friend I've known her since I ...
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Re: Again with the love thing...
This is kind of messed up, the fact that they love them but they aren't together. That stuff is just sad, it makes me afraid of love I've never experienced ...
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Re: She Is Numb
She didn't grow up. She didn't mature. Her mind holds no innocence, nothing is pure. She froze in time. Remained in her same state of mind. Where nothing was good, ...
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Re: Hearts
Close my eyes Shed a tear Heal the wounds That will never heal I really liked this line because it is so true. There are wounds that just don't heal, ...
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Re: In My Mind
There’s a raging river in my mind Where I go to drown my every fear The current foams with teeth like death That's what stuck to my mind, I may ...
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Re: Lost
Wow. Bravo. I Loved the imagery, it was gruesome in my head at one point and my imagination totally went haywire BUT yet I couldn't stop reading it! Very good ...
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Re: Expectations Falling
I really liked this. I may not have interpreted it correctly but I feel like don't expect much. I should know better then to expect from others even my own ...
Sep 9, 2011
