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Re: By That Which You Destroyed
Wow, alot of rage huh? I feel this way at times but for some reason my poems aren't very angry and 'Kill you in your sleep" their sad and sorrowful ...
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Re: Gone With You~Chapter 3
Para Inlese? Hablas Ingles? Splash I gasped as I felt cold water poured on me, I made to wipe my face but realized I was still tied, only this time ...
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Re: A promise Unbroken
They can make you fall in love, They can force you to unleash your desires. They can take you above the clouds. They can kill you when coming from the ...
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Re: I'm Not Perfect.
Even all the scars, Cannot stay forever, They too will waste away. Open wounds, can they heal? Yes they can, but only if you let them. You have to let ...
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Re: Blade-Song
Take me away From what they've said. What I got: Words really can hurt, whoever said that sticks and stones bit. Didn't know what the hell they were talking about. ...
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Re: Oh My Love
Oh my love, Please hold me dear. Cradle my heart, guard it from fear, Make it believe that your true, That you won't break me, You'll make it feel new. ...
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Re: Translucency
This is something I would definitely play on my ipod! I love the chorus I just want to imagine what you would sound like singing it! let our empty eyes ...
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
I really liked this! The feelings the person is feeling I felt them to. Actions do speak louder then words but then sometimes you need to hear things, sometimes the ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Gone With You~ Chapter 2
My Alec, My Frenchie Darkness That's what I was met with when I opened my eyes. I was lying on something hard, something hard and wet. I felt my legs ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Who doesn't like drama?
well who doesn't like drama? haha I so get you! My whole family is pure drama! For example yesterday my cousin (who is a HE) was getting loud and being ...
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Re: Life Is...
But others remain constantly dull, perpetual wallflowers. And there's always that unexpected, altering change of plot. People make me feel as if my life is so dull because I'm home ...
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Re: Forgive
Forgive those who cause pain and sorrow, for no one knows what comes tomorrow... this was my favorite line, and yes it is difficult to forgive sometimes, and you even ...
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Re: Need.
Brooklyn and Tyler.. I love these names! I like the start it's already interesting and I can't wait to see what goes down!
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Re: Prologue: Foreshadowed, just a little bit.
I like this already, it was a catchy beginning and it has a super powers feel well after all they are 'perfect' I wonder how that is going to work ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Happy Ending- Prologue
Woah pretty harsh of her, but I'm intrigued! Why won't she marry him? The beginning seems like it could be more, captivating, but I'm glad I kept reading! can't wait ...
Sep 9, 2011
