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Re: The Swing
Hey I'm sorry if it threw off the flow but I wasn't trying to rhyme there haha my bad
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: 2 Years
2 years you were special to me, you made me feel alive, made me feel butterflies with every stare, you and I were the perfect pair. 2 years you were ...
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Re: Pickles
HAHA! this was the shiznit! I love pickles! It pushed out its arms And shoved out its legs It split near the top A mouth filled with teeth It ran ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Insecurity
Son of a biscuit eating bulldog!! this was my cat's meow (dont have a cat but if I did this would be his meow!) This was short but damn did ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Simple Beauty
Lifting herself up, she begins to cheerfully walk home. The world seems to go silent as she walks, people's voices are nothing but whispers car horn's are nothing but mice. ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: The Swing
The Swing, Back and forth, Smiling and laughing, Sight set north. The Swing, Free from pain, Flying in place, Nothing can separate us, Not even rain. The Swing, Where I ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: My Perfect Girl
This was so sweet !I can't even express my emotions right now or how much I liked it! That to this everlasting relationship You will bring Your love and devotion ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Last Tear
Aw this was so depressing! Poor guy! I’m so tired of waiting I’m so tired of trying I’m so tired of pretending this will someday work out I don’t want ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: The Forest
Animals tremble in horror Shedding tears For a home That was humbly theirs. Now I stand Drenched in sweat A place of beauty Now a land of barrenness. I loved ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Of Love And Broken Toes~Prologue/Chapter1
First kiss Now crossed off that list. Was it voluntary? Not so much, but deep down inside I didn't mind one bit. First Love I hate to admit that it ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: The Truth
What the H-E Double Hockey Sticks! This was wicked! The ending just a mind blow! 'Just the voice in your head' I'm all mother of pearl! This was great! I ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: The Lion
Outrageous so contagious! I really liked this I like the old school medieval feel, like Shakespeare. Claws that grip around my throat, that lay me in my final rest. Pause ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: sorry I am leaving the site due to study issues ( aka no tim
Oh snap! I'm totally intrigued! although I think that in chapter 1 it kind of drags on like detail is great and all some people have a gift for it ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: She Is Unforgiven
Many stories, I choose one to describe, My life in your hands, Amazing I'm still alive. I felt like a fail, Always down, and a deeper hole diggin', Here goes ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Opening the door
Today I'm finally going to do it. I'm going to open the door, Show them the real me. This is something many people fear, you don't know how people are ...
Sep 14, 2011
