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Oenia Seneia She glared at him through the dark strands of her hair, thinking of at least four ways to cause this seaman enough pain to leave him incapacitated for ...

I think this poem has a good concept, and good wording. I think however that it could use a bit more structure. I'm not sure where these changes could be ...

Fighting my passion oh so fleeting, Still I dread the thought of our meeting, Drenched in sweat my heart fast beating, We are blinded by lust, quickly receding. I wish ...

Oenai Seneia Huddled on the floor arms wrapped around folded up knees, Oenai waited for the return of her enslaver. She shivered as through her memory she felt the cold ...

Name: Oenai Seneia Race: Elf Gender: Female Age: 67 Appearance: 6’1” Long wavy chestnut hair tied at the back of her head, flowing to her waist; Upward slanting aquamarine eyes ...

okay so I'm thinking of re-doing my second chapter now. I have time since I am finished with school. I will pry start work on it tomorrow. I know of ...

I fixed it! Guys it took me a bit (what with work, school, and a social life) but I got the first chapter fully edited and updated. Go ahead and ...

Thanks for the suggestions guys! I am in the process of reviving this story. I started writing this 7 years ago (yeah I was 12) so it's not near up ...

~A fight with a thorn bush~ "Princess, Princess!" came the calling of an all too familiar voice, ripping through her unconsciousness and bringing her back to the present. Shenta had ...

Day 1- 8:42 a.m. Lamiaferox The sensation of heat and free falling take over Lamia's world as the blast envelopes the area. Her head bounces off of a table and ...

Thoughts gone astray, Thoughts gone dark, Silent are my prayers, Before I make a mark. Pulled out of darkness, Strangely I arise, Cloudy mind uncomprehending, Looking with slightly different eyes. ...

TNCowgirl. There are a few things I would like to address with your last post. An explosion causes great damage and trauma, not to mention smoke and dust. No character ...

I thought this was a rather crude poem. It does however fall under the narrative poetry category, and with some meter fixing, it could be a decent, if crude poem ...

Day 1, 8:39 a.m. Lamiaferox Lamia continued to twist her hair while the two young men attacked the shooter. The men moved at relatively the same time, but since one ...

Day 1, 8:34 a.m. - Lamiaferox Lamia steps to her immediate right when she enters the Starbucks, and leans against the small space of wall next to the door. She ...