Stealth_Slicer

The reason I use a different character per chapter is I figured I cannot tell the story through one character. So the chapters will be seen through different eyes each ...

Yes there will be a part three up at the week end or shortly after. Thanks for the comment All the best.

You dreamt about dragons? Cool! I usually dream about weird stuff. Anyway here are my honest thoughts on this chapter. I loved your descriptions; you’ve really gone out of your ...

One last thing, I have decided to change and I am cutting out Death Game. Originally Moonlight began to go mad as he got smarter and smarter he kept getting ...

Hi Stealth, I'm not sure if you read my review of your previous chapter. There's always a risk with forums that you're throwing your reviews into a black hole where ...

Sorry my comp has broken and I don’t know when it will be fixed. I can’t give an accurate estimate to when part three will be up. Hopefully with luck ...

I'm not going to do a huge review like last time, just mention a few things you could improve on. The grammar still needs a lot of work, though I ...

Thanks for the support guys! I am glad it is liked even with the mass grammar problems. Also I must admit when I saw the grammar check I was discouraged ...