Stealth_Slicer

Ok sorry for the delay my computer broke same as usual, all comments and tips very welcome and I hope I am geting better. Note: I am going to remake ...

I thought it was a good piece. But I think a little more back story would be good. For example perhaps say more about how he lost his parents, and ...

Very nice but here are some things I felt cold have been improved. The city. Although you say everything was abandoned I didn’t really get a large feeling of it; ...

One last thing, I have decided to change and I am cutting out Death Game. Originally Moonlight began to go mad as he got smarter and smarter he kept getting ...

Hi Stealth, I'm not sure if you read my review of your previous chapter. There's always a risk with forums that you're throwing your reviews into a black hole where ...

Sorry my comp has broken and I don’t know when it will be fixed. I can’t give an accurate estimate to when part three will be up. Hopefully with luck ...

I'm not going to do a huge review like last time, just mention a few things you could improve on. The grammar still needs a lot of work, though I ...

The second and hopefully better part of Shadow Flight: Un-retirement. All tips and comments welcome. Note: I am going to remake the series so far when I get chance. This ...

I liked that and it speaks the truth. It is hard to let go of being insulted etc. I know I got bulled a lot and replied with insults too, ...

That was very emotional. I liked it a lot. You should keep writing, but I couldn’t help but smile at the twenty-story building part. It was…unexpected for me, and I ...

Thanks for the support guys! I am glad it is liked even with the mass grammar problems. Also I must admit when I saw the grammar check I was discouraged ...

Hi guys this is my first work posted online. Due to fear of mistakes (Due to reasons I would like to keep to myself). So please don’t go to heavily ...

Hi all I really like it very mysterious. Not much of a background is given but I think it was intended here, I think you could have put more in ...

Hi all I liked it but even though the core concept was a guy trying to join the military it didn’t seem to show reasons why he was going to ...