Stealth_Slicer

This reminds me strongly of all the zombie games and films EG Left 4 Dead and I am legend. I like the entire essence of survival but I didn’t feel ...

Ok to start off with you begin talking about on of the alien races of your piece. However you don’t include any description of them, back-story yes but not description. ...

Ok here is part two of Dragon market I don’t think it will be as good as part one for some reason. Some of you might be thinking it would ...

I thought it was all right I don’t think I will read much if any more of this series if it becomes one. Not saying I wont read it because ...

Hmm very dark but I am used to things like that and can usually spot stuff coming so wasn’t really scared by what happened. This reminds me of the old ...

I like the blurb too. Unfortunately I read chapter one first so wasn’t fully informed on what has happening but now I understand. I really like chapter one as I ...

The age-old question what if Germany won the war. I like war literature but have never read the stories were Germany won but I am going to read this one ...

I really liked it I am a huge Sci-fi fan. This reminds me of a sci-fi thing I was writing for a friend years ago if I find it I ...

I like it but I agree with Coco, I think something might be missing but I can’t place it ether. But don’t get discouraged. I really like the story so ...

Very nice photo I remind me of when I went to Malham…and almost fell in the river. It was really funny. I was showing off how I could get about ...

Now that was unexpected. I wasn’t overly keen on this but I really liked the end. I think you might have a knack for writing things like this and I ...

Hmm…I don’t know what to make of this one. But I do know it sounds interesting, I hope you do keep writing. This story hits me as sort of a ...

Yes I liked it very well written. I don’t have the faintest idea what plot might spawn but I think you have something good in mind, and I think you ...

You dreamt about dragons? Cool! I usually dream about weird stuff. Anyway here are my honest thoughts on this chapter. I loved your descriptions; you’ve really gone out of your ...

Hi everyone. As I have said in my other works I am not good with grammar and punctuation. But I hope you like this. The idea came to me in ...