Stealth_Slicer

Warp is a term that comes from Star Trek . In real life, it's called FTL (faster than light). Certainly, it's a more recognizable term, though. And, a rift drive ...

I had some spare time so thought I would quickly type up chapter one I don’t think it is as good as it could have been had I had more ...

I liked the idea of an organisation that trains kids to be superhuman, or as you said “Moulds” the kids into super humans. I liked the idea that the character ...

Interesting, its good to see you have gone back and are continuing on from were you left off from one of the characters. Perhaps describe the mass more so readers ...

I liked it but it wasn’t really my thing. I am glad you didn’t give away her power because that is what keeps the reader in suspense, and I rely ...

Hi I am in need of fixing my work to review ratio. I would be happy to review some works. I like Sci-fi, action, survival and modern fantasy and would ...

The descriptions were very good and I could picture it very well. I hope you do write more. I am someone who likes some background, as to what is going ...

Ok I thought I would post some background on the three races involved in that battle. Races Lizarian Home world: Lizaria Description: Green scaled humanoid lizards that have orange slit ...

Ok thanks, I will consider continuing it after I finish off Shadow Flight. Glad you liked it. All the best.

Ok this is something old I found on my computer that I had started but never got chance to continue. I wanted to know what people thought. If it is ...

The reason I use a different character per chapter is I figured I cannot tell the story through one character. So the chapters will be seen through different eyes each ...

Ok chapter four is finally up. Sorry it wasn’t up on Monday like I said but unfortunately real life intervened and delayed me. This might happen again some more times ...

This was better but I still think more physical description is needed. Also I don’t really understand all this skipping from one character to another each chapter. I think you ...

Yes there will be a part three up at the week end or shortly after. Thanks for the comment All the best.

Its good I just spotted a typo in your work that you might want to just quickly edit some time: Posters were every where asking man to join the new ...