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Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four prologue
I might take longer to finish off some other stuff, (for real life) so I decided to post a little bit more. __________________________________________________________________________________________ T
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four prologue
Yes it is a prologue. I am going to finish up Dragon Marked and Shadow Flight for after the weekend. I need to do something ells for Friday. Chapter four ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three
“Black Wolf” tape recorder recording. Wednesday 11.08.3472 08:52 Sol system Earth By Sol, did you mean solar? As in solar system? Ok I have gone over and edited chapter three ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Christmas Day 1914
Only thing I found odd, was the use of forward slashes to separate the stanzas. Just leave a bit of space! It looks neater too! Strangely the spaces haven’t come ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter two
Ok thanks Amy. Part three is already up but I will try and improve in part four. Unfortunately people don’t tend to comment about improvements etc. From what I have ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three
Here is chapter three. I am picking a title but i dont know yet. I dont know what Dragon Market part three or Shadow Flight part five will be up ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 6 of "Tainted Life" by Callum Marshall.
No problem.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Christmas Day 1914
Just a quick poem I decided to write. I decided to do this because we are studying war poetry in English so I decided to take a shot at it. ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 6 of "Tainted Life" by Callum Marshall.
Ok I am still a bit confused wit hall the skipping but still very good. One thing I noticed is you changed the title from: Chapter (1-5) of "Tainted Life" ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Hello. Can you please review this for me? There is a bit of shooting but not really violence. All the best.
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Fruit's Reviews!! :D :)
Hello. Can you please review this for me? There is a bit of shooting but not really violence. All the best.
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Anyone Need A Review??
Hello. Can you please review this for me? There is a bit of shooting but not really violence. All the best.
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter two
Thanks Coco. I'm glad it is liked. :D
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter two
Ok here is chapter two. Getting to the action parts soon. I have a rough Idea of some names but haven’t decided yet. All comments welcome. Enjoy _____________________________________________________
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter one
Hey. I think McMourning pretty much covered the grammar, but if you want to PM me I'll be glad to help you with the punctuation rules and all that jazz. ...
Nov 19, 2009