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Re: (Unnamed) Chapter five part one
Ok I have finally been able to edit this now that I have fixed my computer. (Virus attack) Anyway this is just a quick edit and I am going to ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter five part one
__________________________________________________________________________________________ A traitor receives his next task, Adam Soraka and Seeko meet the base’s new inhabitants and The Princess dr
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: The Completely Awesome Battle
I’m laughing rather hard to be honest. You got all this from two characters fighting over a salt shaker. "Um, we have the same mother," Grif pointed out. "DO NOT ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter four part 2
Four hours later. A blizzard had blown up so we had to walk to the rendezvous point. We couldn’t see further than five meters through the white fog. It was ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter four part 1
Split in half as requested __________________________________________________________________________________________ The Lizarian defences are being strained and now Soraka and Adam help a race recov
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: A dark hero chapter one
I thought I’d get the first part up in the small time I could. My Internet is still not working, so I wouldn’t expect anything for a bit. I think ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four (12+ Version)
That shouldn’t be too hard. When my internet comes back online I will be able to find a point to split it. At the moment I am having light writer’s ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: A Dark Hero: Blurb and Prologue
Ok I have gone through and edited out what has been pointed out. Unfortunately my internet is down so I properly won’t be able to upload anything, for at least ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: A Dark Hero: Blurb and Prologue
Ok this is my idea for what I will write when I finish off the last two or three chapters of Dragon Market. All comments welcome. --------- Blurb --------- Marika ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Helicopter Battle over the neighborhood
Ok my first time doing this so I would get someone else to check it too. Corrections are in bold, and notes are in italics. I am not good with ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter five prologue
Sorry things have become immeasurably complicated in my life. I am not even going to estimate when the next part of any of my things will be up. I apologise ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 8 of "Tainted Life" by Callum Marshall.
Ok I’m still reading, but I am still a bit confused by the changes each chapter. I hope that you go back to other characters soon. I think my favourite ...
Dec 16, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four (12+ Version)
Ok here is part four…again. I reworked it for a lower age rating, so any younger readers can still keep up with the story and not skip a chapter. All ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Cloudscape
I like 2 and 4 the best.
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter four (18+ Version)
Ok here is part four. The next part of Dragon Market will be up tomorrow and Shadow Flight will be up soon after that. This is my first “Real” attempt ...
Dec 11, 2009
