Starstruck_Sarah

Wow this was great! A bit vague in a few parts, but otherwise I could see the vision clearly. Let's pick some things out now... I stalked slowly toward the ...

I read it! And now I'm reviewing it! So, I loved how you describe ALL of the characters. A lot of authors tend to only focus on main characters, but ...

Hello EDay! I'm here I loved this preface. It makes me want to read chapter one. Well, let's get down to the dirty stuff. I screamed at the mirror and ...

It's good, except I'm not very good with poems, so the reason behind this poem is vague to me. The lines are choppy, and the flow is broken into little ...

This is great, EDay! (Heehee) The details are great, and the image is very clear in my mind. Here's a bit of picky grammer details: No. but I am truly ...

Chapter Three Mrs. Smith walked past me without saying anything. Her expression was severely grim. I watched her go, and she never met my eyes. She walked with determination, her ...

I really like on how Nanali has changed since her heart has left her body. I enspecially like how you said, "She didn't feel sadness, hurt, angry, or anything, she ...

I like the descriptions, but at the beginning let's tone it down a little. It can drive readers away with too many details. I know this may sound strange, but ...

“Charity, dear, do you think you could care for my children today?” I looked up from the corn I was harvesting. An older woman, in her forty’s I guess, was ...

I was hooked by the first paragraph. This is a really deep story, and it has alot of potential. The only thing that bothered me were when the story had ...

This poem sends a message. I really like it, you really put yourself out there. The title fits it, which is kind of hard to do sometimes. The title really ...

This is a nice poem. It looks like a list, which can be good and bad. When it's a list, people sometimes don't want to read it. It drives them ...

I loved reading it, and the vibrant details kept me into the whole story. You really described Legend's Hallow well, and I could visualize it. I also want to see ...

Blood Soaked Snow Chapter One The streets were vacant and dark. The streetlamps had all been taken away, for no one walked down these roads anymore. The buildings had been ...

Wow, this is impressive. When I read this, it made me think of the word "Teenager." When you said that the word "Wild." comes with it, I nodded my head. ...